Pre Teen Beach Is This Good For A Pre-teens B-day Party?

Is this good for a pre-teens b-day party? - pre teen beach

Part 1
Friday after school to stay home for an hour to stroll, etc. can be found at the micro-it-Tevo Beach (I do not know how to spell had ...) a photo session, dinner, cake, open gifts Cill - ax a little bit more (lol)
and go home for part 2

Part 2
Better to go home as a film, play, see gifts
(Sleep) to speak to go to sleep a little more to D

lol help me w / 2 Hand or give me a new idea for the festival! Thank you!